“People read with their ears, whether they know it or not.” – William Zinsser, On Writing Well
I grew up surrounded by artistic people who would sometimes let me into their studios when they were working. My dance teacher would say, “Close your eyes and feel the movement,” when I was trying to “see” the steps. A friend of my mother’s who was a painter would say that she could “hear” a painting being born under the brush strokes across the canvas. Another friend who was an architect said that the New Mexico landscape of sagebrush and clay and cacti “talked” to him and told him where and how to design and build a house.
The sighing, breathing, groaning, writhing, and sweating of modern dancers in the University of New Mexico gymnasium as they rehearsed for a performance literally seemed to help a dance be born. My mother’s friend would listen to classical music as she painted, the energy of it focusing her attention on her work, and, I imagined, shaping the subject matter on the canvas, but she never talked about that part of it.
Watching each of these people work always seemed to me to be physical rather than intellectual – the creation of art needed a physical, emotional, sensory element.
When I was in my first play, when I was 14, the director said, “Rehearse your lines out loud. Words have energy and that energy will help you memorize them.” And it was true, but I didn’t know it was possible to write the same way…using the energy of the words themselves, saying them out loud. Not just mouthing the words, but speaking them, as though I was reading them to someone else in the room.
My three favorite books on writing are Bird by Bird, by Anne Lamott, The Elements of Style, by E.B. White and William Strunk, Jr., and On Writing Well, by William Zinsser.
I love the attached story in the Times about Zinsser, who is 90 and can no longer see. So he coaches writers by “hearing” them read their words out loud.
It reminded me of Andrea Bocelli, to whom I listen almost exclusively when I drive Interstate. He is blind…but his inner sight is remarkable. I have always had a fear of not being able to see, or losing some other sense. But when I listen to Bocelli, I know he has the ability to tune into something “else.” Whatever it is, it’s an interesting lesson…using the absence of one sense to tune into another.
It’s all about energy…
April 28, 2013 at 11:06 pm
Hi Giselle Minoli, thanks for your Sunday piece or should I say composition keeping with the musical theme.
Not only does music isnpire, focus and get the creative juices going, it is also the the equivalent of the photo album. I remember exactly what I was doing when certain songs were played.
April 28, 2013 at 11:18 pm
Wonderful story, Giselle Minoli ! You always save the day! Hope, you had a nice weekend!
April 28, 2013 at 11:40 pm
Hi Tazein Mirza Saad and dawn ahukanna. Big dilemma what to post about today. It’s the Sunday Times, which I look forward to reading and there was also this interesting article about the performance artist Marina Abramovic. I listened to several interviews with her and I spent the morning thinking about creative energy and where it comes from, and what I feel when I’m in the presence of it, and what it feels like when I myself am in it, and, Yes, what it feels like when I can’t seem to access it.
And then I read the article on Zinsser and it was more accessible to post about. I mean we all speak…and to one degree or another we all write. And maybe the difference between those of us who are writers and those who think they can’t write is that for those of us who are it can be described in certain ways.
I love writers…
April 28, 2013 at 11:44 pm
I too write … Code. Give me Java ( not the coffee but is a
So required), JavaScript, PHP, ruby etc and I am in my element. {>_<}.
eloquence in English, still working on that.
April 28, 2013 at 11:54 pm
Yeah, well, coffee is music to my ears dawn ahukanna. I can’t do anything without it in the morning…Take my coffee away in the morning or my wine away at night and (should I admit this?) there are no words!
April 29, 2013 at 12:13 am
Lance Hagood Yoda got it right. I cannot think of one single aspect of life where “Feel the force…” doesn’t apply. Can you?…Sports, music, dancing, writing, creating, and every other profession, creative or not…
April 29, 2013 at 12:13 am
<----- thinks: Ahhhhh, no evening wine! That’s what I been missing
There was me thinking I need to work harder, I just need to work “wined”. LOL
April 29, 2013 at 12:15 am
dawn ahukanna I didn’t think there was such a thing as dinner without wine… Is there?
April 29, 2013 at 12:22 am
<------ Ahhhh shucks! I gotta start taking notes
So its “wined and dined”, another essential skill to add to the list. Also need to add music and olfactory detection of creative work.
Anything else I need to add? {>_<}.
April 29, 2013 at 12:24 am
You coders are odd folk dawn ahukanna. Truth be told, I’m jealous. I wish I knew how to do what you know how to do. It’s music, painting, dancing and wine making all rolled into one profession…
April 29, 2013 at 12:35 am
ROTFLMAO.
I’m odd folk now, am I? Only you could get away with “saying” folk.
Jokes aside, writing code requires unlimited imagination and creativity with a limited vocabulary and rigid syntax, cos you are writing to a machine.
Your writing, which you make look so easy, is so much harder to do really well as people a multi-faceted and unique.
April 29, 2013 at 12:58 am
“Odd folk” is a term of endearment dawn ahukanna. Writing is impossible. But coding? You have to memorize things. Forget it. Writers are not independent. We need other people. I picture coders as being so independent. You all control the world now…
April 29, 2013 at 1:24 am
I hate that I lost my crafted comment! Must remember to copy often.
I figured “odd folk” was complimentary, just made me burst out laughing as I don’t hear that phrase often. LOL.
The best programmers I worked with have music degrees.
Writing code is a bit like composing, which requires collaboration and writing sheet music. You could teach people how to play by showing them but if you want the machine to imitate, you have to read and write sheet music (code).
That is just like learning another language. Once you become fluent, its instinctive rather than something you have to remember.
How do you write your pieces? Get it on paper and then edit or compose it in your head first and then write?
April 29, 2013 at 1:44 am
I’m going to assume that you are really asking me. And the answer is that writing is visual for me and I personally don’t know a single writer for whom it is easy. It’s extremely difficult for everyone in different ways. Which is the reason that I made this post today. Zinsser now “hears” words because when spoken out loud they are musical to the listeners/readers ears (for Zinsser…I don’t disagree with him)…but for me, when I write, I need to see a visual picture, like a painting. It has to hit me and the process of it “hitting me” has to do with giving myself the time for that to happen. Then I work through it in my head. Then I put it on paper and edit as I go. The words on the paper have to match what I “see” in my head. I edit until that happens.
I would love to watch a coder work. I like the process of watching creative people do what they do. Particularly dancers. Maybe because there is movement and music and you can “see” the process.
There is a great documentary dawn ahukanna of Picasso painting. The cameraman was on the other side of a scrim watching him work, changing the painting like a madman. It went through so many incarnations before it was finished…The Mystery of Picasso…it really describes it beautifully. This is just an excerpt…
Mystery of Picasso
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0049531/
April 29, 2013 at 2:01 am
I was really asking and that last comment was a brain dump.
One thing I notice as a trend generally for people working within a creative process is they “see”, “hear” or somehow visualise the finished piece in their mind’s eye before they start writing, painting, choreographing, coding an expression of the “vision”.
I have most of the code written in my head as an expression of my idea and “edit” or refine it with micro testing as I go along. Also have a larer set of tests (like orchestra rehearsals) to make sure when all the bits are played together, they “sound” right.
So very similar process, with different outcomes.
Question: Why do you find writing hard?
Is it hard getting to the visual point or the actual writing/editing itself?
April 29, 2013 at 2:25 am
It’s difficult dawn ahukanna because – think about it – there are so many words that have to go down on the paper. Thousands upon thousands upon thousands of them. Many people talk about the loneliness, the solitary nature of it. A musician writes notes. A painter puts down brush strokes. Thousands of notes. Thousands of brush strokes. To create an entire piece, a book, a sonata, a painting, a choreographed dance.
To say that it is difficult does not mean there isn’t joy and pleasure and satisfaction. But it is a challenge, particularly to push yourself into discomfort, whether it’s a style exploration or an emotional exploration. It isn’t intellectual. It’s mind, soul, body, spirit.
When I attend a dance, or concert, or reading, or exhibition, what moves me always moves me in all of those ways. Rarely just one.
Do you find working difficult? BTW I think being creative applies to just about anything – teaching, starting a business, being a surgeon…we’ve just decided culturally that the “arts” are this separate entity. I think science is an art.
April 29, 2013 at 2:31 am
Yes Lance Hagood Yes. When I was first moved to New York and would visit the museums I would stand in front of a painting and wonder if it was the same painting in the middle of the night with no one looking at it. I have met creative people who say that they don’t need anyone to read what they write or see what they paint or hear what they compose. I tend to think that we all do, however. It is communication. There’s a lovely story in the times about J.D. Salinger’s letters to a young woman when he was 22, before Catcher In the Rye. He of course became a recluse…but when he was writing he was reaching out. That has always seemed to me to be the human condition. To want to communicate.
I picked up The Great Gasby today. The movie is coming out. 180 pages of gold.
April 29, 2013 at 2:41 am
The difficulty for me is my fingers don’t move fast enough over the keyboard to create concrete model. I still have to continually run the micro and macro test which can be like watching paint dry.
I get the thrill from getting to the point were I have wrestled mentally through the problem to a solution (composing the melody) that I know is going to work (the visual in your case) and tend to write in long blocks producing the almost finshed item and micro-testing (edits). At this point the macro-testing (rehearsal) is usually a formality and should only require tweaks.
If it requires more, it is a good indication the solution is discordant and its back to the problem solving (composing) basics.
April 29, 2013 at 3:11 am
All right. Now that’s a book for my list. Have you read On Writing by Stephen King? I find myself wondering about the titular similarity.
April 29, 2013 at 3:25 am
Hi Bill Collins I haven’t but I know people who have. I respect what Stephen King has created for himself but I don’t read his books, so I wasn’t inspired to buy that one. But if you want to read one gem of a little book…it’s E.B. White’s Here is New York. It one of a short stack of books I travel with and that I pick up and read once every 8 or 10 months or so. Brilliant. I wish I had written it. I wish I had been alive and in New York when it was published in 1949…
April 29, 2013 at 11:55 am
What a thoughtful and personal comment to wake up to Eve A. Thank you. I had never quite thought of it that way. I, too, hear a voice when I read, but it isn’t that of an actor or actress, it’s a voice I make up that goes with the character I’m reading about…or the narrator, if there is one.
I can, however, listen to television voice-overs (almost always done by celebrities) and nail who the actor/actress is. Voices are powerful, the strength of voice, the tone in the voice, the inflection, phrasing. Why musically I prefer singer/songwriters, or bands where there is harmony.
If you can believe it I haven’t done any HangOuts (I don’t have the time), but would love to do a “radio” interview because I’m so much more interested in voices than I am face. That perhaps because I was an actor and people really do type cast you by how you look. At least that’s my experience. I like the freedom in being a writer and having some mystery there. I don’t think everything has to be given away.
Perhaps it’s just that I love voices, I love the spoken word, I love the art of storytelling. I think it’s powerful. Which is why the article on Zinsser resonated.
I agree with you about Anna Karenina. I couldn’t see the movie either. I wasn’t interested in the slightest!
I do have a little boy of Tolstoy’s Tales, which is one of my favorite books…on the stack by my bed always.
But if you were to ask me which writer has the most colorful voice? Hands down it would be Gabriel Garcia Marquez. Music to my ears.
April 29, 2013 at 3:04 pm
The sights and sounds that surround us shape us as they become entwined in our makeup. Those that realize this and set about to control their environment will enjoy a life more of their choosing than those who mindlessly follow the crowd.
April 30, 2013 at 7:46 pm
Yes, awfully interesting. I have the feeling of being able to do with the loss of hearing but not the loss of sight.
April 30, 2013 at 11:35 pm
Hello Kathy Clulow and Marie Hélène Visconti…oh I hate thinking about which sense I could more easily give up. I think they are a substitute for money for me, I mean in the sense that if one can create the various stings of life sting less. I have always had very loud and noisy senses….I can hear the man snore down the street, the noise level of TV commercials literally hurts my ears, I have a high pain threshold but don’t care for pain…I much prefer pleasure, I can discern spices in food and my sense of smell is acute. Pity I don’t have a “Feel for” the stock market!
Georgia O’Keefe was interesting because when her sight failed she became a sculptor. I think it’s true that we listen more with one sense when another is taken from us…
I wonder if Zinsser is a better teacher as a listener of words rather than as a reader of them. Hmmmmm…
May 1, 2013 at 8:29 pm
Stacie Florer this is so serendipitous because I was just this moment reading your post about going “back home” with your husband and I was on your Profile wondering what your photography, jewelry and art will be in your new space. I completely get this move for you. There are windows that open up in our lives at certain moments, but sometimes we cannot see that the window is in fact open and so we don’t go through it. That you and your husband are stepping through it together in unison is fabulous.
I know that you will not abandon all of this technology and that you will share with us your new experiences, but at the same time I champion your need to “listen to,” “hear,” “feel,” “see,” and “sense,” something non technological in the company of people who know you well.
I probably should have left that comment on your post…but here you were and so here I am!
May 1, 2013 at 8:42 pm
And back to you Stacie Florer. We met one another here quite some time ago now. G+ is like a country in and of itself, with different States, different Cities, different Communities (now, sadly, IMHO) and it isn’t so easy to pass one another in the Piazza it seemed to be two years ago, which is at once a long time ago, and also very recently…